Monday, February 18

Can't be your valentine

Don't care for me so much,
I might get used to it...

Don't come so close to me,
I might not be able to
Detach
from
it

Don't put so much faith in me,
I might not be able to handle it...

Don't be a part of my life,
I won't be able to live without it

Don't make me fall for you,
I may not be able to get up after it

Don't come into my life,
If you have to
L
E
A
V
E
One day

Don't give me hope,
That its forever to stay...

Cause love is an emotion;
I ain't know how to hide..
When it won't be reciprocated,
It will hurt deep inside..

Don't start something,
I wont be able to end

Don't make me believe
That you can be more than a friend...

Cause at the end of it
I don't want to hear you say,
" I am sorry, but I never felt the same..."


7 comments:

Deepshikha said...

Its not with reference to my relation with anybody... Its just in he spirit of my singlehood, and I'd prefer if u dont read to much into it... :) Is just fictional poem, and I promise to that

Rohit Sharma said...

You never know what happens,when you really face it. To stop oneself is to avoid facing the fear which stops you from conquering it.
A very sweet poem.

Voice said...

you live only if u have someone or something u cannot live without :)

good poem
for a change i was able to understand it :D

ending is very good :)

sean said...

Thank you for your kind words. I loved your poem! It resonates very closely with what my heart would say - if I happened to meet someone whom I think I would like to know better and enjoy the passing of time, doing it.

There is also a subtle message there - that we should be careful not to create a need for ourselves in someone else's life, if we are not prepared to take the journey further. And I mean all relationships.

But here is the one thought that I own, even if I have not entirely succeeded in embracing it...ultimately..."Love is the only risk worth taking!"

I continue to hug this truth in my ongoing journey into mystery, love and light.

Deepshikha said...

@ roh: Sweet is very blanket word :) but yeah I agree not facing it doesn't mean it won't conquer u...

@ voice: Point noted and agreed upon sir..
Thank u

Deepshikha said...

Sean:- The words were hardly kind...They were actually my deep sense of gratitude :)

:) That is something which makes me think the most... Sometimes people don't care enough to notice what their actions do to others...Little little gestures maynot remain little for others, and then playing with somebodies feelings is what sociey is all about :)

Sheesh! I know I sounded very cynical, sorry :)

I consciously don't think you can stop or make yourself fall in love..Its a feeling which would grow..
All the best in your life, and people as compassionate as u, do get the best :)

Anonymous said...

knocked me for a six sweetheart!!!!
Trust me one day you will crash headlong into love, and you'll not know how to be insecure... Always trust me words when I say, "If you are insecure in a relation, its the other persons fault, because Sil you are never possessive, immature, intrusive, jealous or demanding which breeds insecurity...
May you fall in love soon...